Reading Evan's plan

Partly built

Every clause explained, and three numbers for each one we are negotiating.

Each clause gets a colour. Green is market normal. Amber is worth pushing. Red is a deal-breaker. Teal means a lawyer should look.
Each clause we negotiate gets three numbers. What we ask for. What we will settle for. Where we stop.
He tells you why, in one line, so you can disagree.
Legal-shaped clauses are flagged from the heading, before he has read a word. See when a clause needs a lawyer.
Under every read, the same line: commercial view on market practice, not legal advice.